Hi yicheng, thank you for sharing your blog.

I like reading your module 3 blog post. You did a good story and it sounds very compelling, impactful although it is short and simple. The narrative and characters are vivid and your details are provided through the board you created on Twine. You used good techniques to engaged the audience , it was well-crafted and also created an emotional connection with the audience as well. The storytelling you made was impressive and it also related to lots of people’s personal experiences as well.